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HEAVY DUTY PREMIUM QUALITY - 100% cotton canvas, 18 oz. material heavy duty; durable and soft
CONVENIENT AND SAFE - Soft 12" handles to wear on the shoulder for an entire day, Zippered top closure to keep everything safe, Huge front pocket (8.5" Length x 8.5" Width) for grab-and-go items
DETAILED EMBROIDERY - Premium thread stitched Flamingo to ensure long lasting design through the years
BEAUTIFUL VIBRANT COLORS AVAILABLE - Perfect for shopping as a shoulder bag, grocery market runs, and days out at the beach! Great as a birthday gift or on Christmas and Mother's Day. Featured in Purple
SPACIOUS MAIN COMPARTMENT - Very generously spaced main compartment (23" Length x 14" Height x 7" Depth) to fit all your daily items, some towels, clothes, and groceries plus room to spare