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New Upgrade Design -New bow bag adds a detachable chain shoulder strap while retaining the bow decoration, which is more convenient to use. Give you a variety of choices. (The bag will look better after you fill it with items.)
Adequate Space: Fashion bow purse has 1 main compartment with safe and convenient zipper closure; enough space for your summer necessities; the zipper ensures the safety of the items
Summer Essential: This bow clutch is a must have for summer it will make the perfect accessory for beach trips, brunch dates, tropical getaways and every day
Occasion: Summer straw handbag is perfect for cocktail, party, prom, wedding, dressing up, balls, club, prom, engagement, dinner, festival, evening out; this trendy woven purse is great as a present for mom or female friend on birthday, anniversary or other festivals
Superior Material: Straw beach bag is made from paper straw with elaborate handwoven knit by artisans; lined with soft fabric; chic essential bag for this summer